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bubbaknert · 3-19-16, 10:10 PM

(3-19-16, 10:06 PM)Pierces10 Wrote: Today I've been having a really rough day because one of my closest friends decided she hated me.

Thats sucks man i would tell you what i would say to her but you know you would hate me.

Pierces10 · 3-19-16, 10:41 PM

(3-19-16, 10:10 PM)bubbaknert Wrote: Thats sucks man i would tell you what i would say to her but you know you would hate me.

That's true. Why does love have to be so damn hurtful.

bubbaknert · 3-19-16, 10:52 PM

(3-19-16, 10:41 PM)Pierces10 Wrote: That's true. Why does love have to be so damn hurtful.

Don't worry i love people but i don't tell them. Just wow though you had someone that you like and you were close with her? damn you probably even knew her phone number. i have never gotten that far besides i am in a super small private school (class of 18 in 7th to 8th grade.) so everybody knows everybody, even then i have no courage to walk up to a gal. be proud of yourself and remember that family is forever. when it comes to friends you lose some and you get some no matter how close you guys were eventually you guys would move on.

SashaServal · 3-19-16, 10:58 PM

(3-19-16, 10:06 PM)Pierces10 Wrote: I think it looks great so far. Today I've been having a really rough day because one of my closest friends decided she hated me. I liked her as more than a friend and would go far enough to say we loved each other. I felt like life was a pile of shit until I read up to the surprise "Praise the Overlord". Fixed my day for the most part. Thank you

Well, that sucks. I'm sorry to hear that. But I'm glad I was able to help a little. I'm sure anyone outside of LFG might react differently to that line, everyone here would probably laugh at it. Also, thank you for the suggestions. I really think they helped to improve the story so far.

Creeper · 3-19-16, 11:27 PM

@Alextobyteam will I at least praise @~~The Middlelord~~ in the story?

SashaServal · 3-20-16, 12:21 AM

(3-19-16, 11:27 PM)Creeper Wrote: @Alextobyteam will I at least praise @~~The Middlelord~~ in the story?

Probably not...

SashaServal · 3-20-16, 12:04 PM

Finished chapter three.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bx9P...sp=sharing

bubbaknert · 3-20-16, 12:14 PM

(3-20-16, 12:04 PM)AlexTobyTeam Wrote: Finished chapter three.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bx9P...sp=sharing

Oh man i have not read the first 2 so then i read the third and brian murdered everybody or something like dayum this escalated from 1-100 real fast.

SashaServal · 3-20-16, 12:37 PM

(3-20-16, 12:14 PM)bubbaknert Wrote: Oh man i have not read the first 2 so then i read the third and brian murdered everybody or something like dayum this escalated from 1-100 real fast.

Yeah, it makes more sense if you read the first two chapters. Especially considering that the chapters are not individual stories independent of each other.

SashaServal · 3-20-16, 08:27 PM

I'm not posting the entire fourth chapter yet, but I just want to post this exchange:

The two injured fighters stared at each other. Breaking the silence, Koan began laughing maniacally again. “So, it appears that Koan has met his match. You are tougher than Koan thought. Koan likes a fight. But it now appears to Koan that we are in a stalemate. You cannot fight, Koan cannot fight. But Koan praises the Overlord. The Overlord will give Koan enough strength to finish you. Koan will prevail! Praise the Overlord!” As Koan shouted the last words, he threw his head back and spread his arms to shout it up to the sky.
“Fuck the Overlord,” Pierce said, seconds before diving forward.

Also, I think I might be a sociopath.

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